Hi Lara, Really good first post! Enjoyed listening to that a lot. Nice simple recording. Easy melody to pick up with some nice melodic hooks. Lyrically I just have some small suggestions. A lot of your lines being with "weak" words - you, and, yes. Not only are some of these rushed through to get to the next word (like "and fall" in the third line), but is means a delay in getting to the meat of the lyric. They're best missed out or changed, I think. So for example: I come to you again Laying down my rights Fall at your feet again And lose myself in you It would also be helpful to remove the pauses between You are/the king of/glorious light so that that line scans more easily. It's a little difficult to pick up at the moment. The chorus would be stronger I think wthout as many lines starting with you, for example: My God, you are great. I'll always stand in awe of you. (Remember that in the verse you've fallen at his feet - it's probably best to keep the imagery consistent within one song) My king, you reign... But these are all minor things. Good job!