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28 January 2010 - 7:29am
I wrote this song while reflecting on the life of our local body throughout the last year. I wanted to provide an opportunity to sing of God's faithfulness despite our hardship and suffering. I would appreciate any thoughts, tips or comments. Lyrics are below.
Thanks,
benmead
Thank You
V1:
Thank You Great Provider
For all You’ve given me
Though I’ve known want and plenty
You’ve met my every need
Chorus:
When I think what would be
But for You and what You’ve done for me
I wonder
I marvel at Your love
V2:
Thank You Great Protector
For sheltering my soul
Though tragedy befall me
You’ve kept me safe and whole
V3:
Thank You Great Redeemer
For suffering on that tree
Though once I was a stranger
Your blood atoned for me
Bridge:
O sovereign God
It’s who You are, it’s what You’ve done
Tag:
I wonder
I marvel at Your love
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31 January 2010 - 5:28am
Can I get a witness?
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Hi Benmead, I seem to remember liking most of the stuff you put up here before, and this is no exception! I really like your instrumentation (sounds a bit like Athlete, one of my favourite bands...)
The first two verses of the song are consistent in terms of theme, but then the songs seems to veer off in a different direction, i.e. it starts talking about how God keeps us safe and provided for throughout our struggles and then goes off to talk about redemption from sin, which to me doesn't really fit the rest of the song.
I like the build up in the bridge, but have to ask: What is "who you are" and what is "What you've done"?
As I said, however, I really like the song, and love your instrumentation, understated and yet compelling to listen to!
God Bless,
Alex
Hi Benmead, I seem to remember liking most of the stuff you put up here before, and this is no exception! I really like your instrumentation (sounds a bit like Athlete, one of my favourite bands...)
The first two verses of the song are consistent in terms of theme, but then the songs seems to veer off in a different direction, i.e. it starts talking about how God keeps us safe and provided for throughout our struggles and then goes off to talk about redemption from sin, which to me doesn't really fit the rest of the song.
I like the build up in the bridge, but have to ask: What is "who you are" and what is "What you've done"?
As I said, however, I really like the song, and love your instrumentation, understated and yet compelling to listen to!
God Bless,
Alex
Alex. Thanks for the feedback! A couple thoughts in reply...
Re: Verse 3, it is hared for me to imagine thanking our sovereign God and not including the cross. For me it is intrinsically intertwined into who He is and what He's done for me.
Re: The bridge, "who You are" is my provider, protector and redeemer. "What You've done" is provide, protect and redeem. I think of it as a worshipful response to our sovereign God for who He is and what He's done...
Thoughts?
Anyone else have any thoughts? All opinions appreciated.
Anyone? Bueller? Bueller?
wow. ben. i'm blown away. it's not very often that you hear an original worship song that pushes musical boundaries. leans outside of the mold. you've done it. well done! i love it. great, great job. the only thing i could hear different was have a live drum kit and some heavier guitars come in on that bridge. it builds so well into it....i might just go for it all the way. again, fantastic!
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