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Gravatar for Marc Proctor Marc Proctor From New Hope Church
25 January 2012 - 10:27pm

I think this one is close to done, threw a rough recording together for now.

My hopes my dreams
Need Your design
they're at Your feet
no longer mine

all I have was Yours
before it became my own
all I am is Yours
to have and make Your own

Here I am, I lay me down
all of my life I surrender to You
all of me, before you now
with all that I am I surrender to You

My strength is weak
but You are strong
Ya'Make me complete
Carry me on

I cant make it far
without You beside me
a child in the dark
without You here to guide me

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Gravatar for mrhatch mrhatch From unknown
#1
26 January 2012 - 1:28pm

Hi Marc

i really like these lyrics, they flow a lot more than the last song you posted up.

why do you call the song surrendered when its not mentioned in the lyrics.

why dont you call it surrender instead.

Gravatar for Marc Proctor Marc Proctor From New Hope Church
#2
26 January 2012 - 7:10pm

Thanks MRHATCH! This song has been floating around my songbooks for a few years now, so it has benefited from some rewrites. Title has changed a few times. Last thought I had was "Surrendered" describes the stated goal for the individual singing it, and I have found many songs already titled "Surrender"... appreciate you thoughts, I've had way too much time to think about it. May change it to "Surrender" still though...

Thanks again!

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