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28 October 2009 - 3:21pm
i kinda wrote this as an 'easter song' but am living to regret it as it never gets used any other time of year, even though i think it could be used more widely!
the recording is a slightly ropey one from church, but you get the idea.
thoughts and feedback greatly appreciated!
words:
Son of God, Holy One.
1
Son of God, Holy one
You exchanged heaven’s light
For a carpenter’s labouring hands.
You came down to your own,
Chose our home as your home,
Stood before us as God made man.
Though you healed, forgave, lived a perfect life,
As a sinner condemned you died
Bearing all the righteous wrath of God
On the awful cross of Christ!
2
In my place you were nailed,
You were beaten and shamed,
But your death takes all sin away
Far as east is from west -
Freed from guilt, ever blessed,
By the pain that you bore that day.
All at your expense, undeservedly,
All God’s riches are offered me.
All the grace of God to sinners shown
On the glorious cross of Christ!
3
Shut and sealed in a tomb,
But in measureless strength
You defeated the grave’s great power.
Now the conqueror of death,
And of sin, and of Hell
He is risen, all fear is gone!
Love so deep and sure, life forever more
Lavished freely on those who live
In the saving power of God, displayed
In the empty tomb of Christ!
4
Now ascended you reign
As you’re seated again
At the Father’s right hand in heaven.
All our hoping is sure
And your promise secure
That you’re coming again one day.
Then at last we’ll see all the majesty
Of the glorious king we serve,
As eternity resounds with praise
For the precious cross of Christ!
Music & lyrics © Matt Rushby 2006.
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30 October 2009 - 12:55am
Matt - this is totally sweet mate! The combination of your voice, the lyric, the melody is really quite something. I like that this is rather quiet different from a lot of songs out there at the moment - really refreshing. I do like the fact that this is very hymnal in it's structure and layout although the melody and general stylistic feel of the song is possibly less hymnal and more along the lines of a "story song". I hate making these comparisons because it so pigeon holes a person so take with a pinch of salt but it's almost reminiscent of some of the older Chris de Burgh, Don Fransisco sort of stuff (though that is a VERY loose comparison and I'd make this comparison only in terms of the story telling aspect of it.
Only real suggestion would be to maybe look at taking the final 2 lines in a different direction so as to give the song an even bigger, higher reaching climax. I realise that your intention might have been to achieve that in the 7th line and then to resolve if thereafter so mine is just a suggestion.
Sounds too like you've done this in church and roadtested it somewhat - how's the response been and which bits work the best (sounds good everyone joining you in the final stanza)
Really like this dude - nice one. Keep writing.
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stupid issues with login - hence new account, but it is me :)
have used it in church and response has been good - people seemed to pick it up easily and it works well with a band or just a few instruments. i think this is really important as i'm trying to discipline myself to write for the church where i am, not the conference i wish i was leading worship at... i think it's a big trap we all fall into sometimes, if you know what i mean?
the recording is of when we used it during communion - so people were taking bread and wine and using the words as a sort of meditation, and it really moved a lot of people, which was just amazing. also hence them just joining in on the last verse once they had empty mouths !!
thanks for your feedback - not too sure about chris and don, though...
haha - DUDE! The Chris and Don was more in terms of it's story telling, acoustic vibe so PLEEEEZZZZ don't take that the wrong way. And besides, Chris and Don ROCK!!
You make a VERY good point about writing for the church you're IN and not the worship conference you wish you were leading. OUCH!!! LOL
Hey - am I right in saying you're at Kingsgate as in Peterborough as in Dave Smith?
nah, Kingsgate as in Bury St Edmunds. there are, like, a gajillion Kingsgate churches i think!
as well as the whole 'writing for a conference' thing, i've been thinking a lot about knowing when a song is just between you and God, and when you should take the plunge and teach it at church. i think some of the problems i have with the whole 'i, me' led worship stuff is that it might come out of a lack of discernment over what God gave you that song for
ie sometimes it's just between you and him and that's ok! not every song you write has to make an appearance on a sunday to be valid.
does that make sense?
loving these conversations, man, loving them!
matt
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