Yeh its a shame i dont ahve a recording..ill try my best to make one however its so hard to make it soudns good using ust a computer! thanks for your comments. I thoguht about the whole changing from 'he' to you when i was writing the song but when i was first using it it was for preformance. From talking to my singing teacher we just thought mabey the first bit was almost for looking at people and saying 'wow god did this for me' then it almost took off into a point of personal worship. I don't know if that quite made sense or not! But i do see where your comming from. Mabey in that sense its more of a song i could use during communion for people to lsiten to...its worked well in the past. Also i agree with what you said about the second verse. Its important to bring variety. I can say i dint intially think of that but thankyou for pointing it out. Also i agree with your comment on the title. I felt it was the strongest part of the song..but in suual cases that is the chorus! Thanks youve given me a lot to consider! Katie xxx