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26 February 2010 - 10:34pm
Hi Guys,
Been working on this song for a while. As the tile suggest its about life going round again and getting no where on your own strength. The bridge then recognises that God is is all we need and that God give our life purpose!
Verse1
I’m walking down the street again
The same old road it has no end
I dare not dream believe again
So many dreams lost to the wind
Verse 2
Life’s unfair it seems that way
I’m falling short just another day
I’m loosing hope I’m loosing time
I can’t escape the path ahead
Help me find a way
Chorus
I’m going round and round and round again
Round and round and round again
Seeings not believing
Touching isn’t feeling
Help me find a way to dream again
Verse 3
When silence falls I’m alone again
Falling on my knees in pain
I surrender all to you again
I want to walk the road you have
Help me find a way
Bridge
You are the only one I’ve ever needed
You are my life and my dreams
You’ll be the one that helps me find those dreams
So I don’t want to go
Final Chorus
Round and round and round again
Don’t wanna go Round and round and round again
Seeings not believing
Touching isn’t feeling
Help me find a way to dream again
Any thoughts or suggestions?
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27 February 2010 - 10:57pm
Also just to clarify this the purpose of the song - obviously the lyrics aren't taken from bible passages but what I have tried to do is tell my testimony though the song....
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That songs sounds wonderful! I didn't actually listen to it, but just by looking at the lyrics, I can see that it is a great song and that it really comes from the heart!
Well done! :)
I am 17 and have been a Christian since I was 3, and writing songs not long after. I began leading worship a couple of years ago and am always looking for advice and help in becoming a better worship leader and making my relationship with God more intimat
really catchy! loving it, at first i thought it would be a bit too long, but the way you have aranged it is actualy amazing, simmple and efective!
my only negative point is that the bridge sounds like 'the stand' by hillsong, maybe you could redo that, but thats up to you....... overall really great song!
love god. love life. love worship
Thanks for the comments guys, yeah I know the bridge is very similar and had thought about changing it.
Its not the first time I've written a chorus or somthin and listened to it the next day and realised its almost identical to something someone else has written! Anyone else have that problem?
same here!
love god. love life. love worship





