In this months episode we have great new song and interview from Soul Survivor's Beth Croft. Also Tim and Ben have a 'perfect pitch' show down!
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21 November 2009 - 5:56pm
G
No song could tell,
C
No lips could explain:
Em
The works you have done,
C
Your glorious name.
G
Faith, hope and love
C
alive in your church,
Em
glory unveiled
C
yet we still search...
D C D C
For a glimpse of you, for a glimpse that’s true.
G
Surprised by Joy, in awe of love
C
We stand together on this earth
Em
To give you glory and praise your name
C D
and with one voice we will proclaim.......
Em D C Em D C
Tag: Here we stand, we reach out for your hand.
© 2009, Daniel Fitzpatrick
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21 November 2009 - 10:19pm
Hello Daniel,
I think this shows real promise. You have been careful in making sure that your lyrics scan etc. I do feel that your melody is a little narrow - you use a three note cell rather a lot when the lyrics cry out for a more expansive approach. I might be being a bit picky though.
God bless,
Ian
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Thanks Ian,
Really appreciate your comments. I am not musically minded, what do you mean by 'three note cell'? and what do you mean by the 'lyrics scan'?
Thanks for the feedback.
Dan
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