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NEW SONG: IN YOUR PRESENCE
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Very rough demo

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Hi Rob, can you post the lyrics? Just makes it a lot easier to comment.

Ta

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I will delight myself in You
You are my hearts desire
And everyday I’ll give my all
Always I’ll trust in You Lord

Chorus
In Your presence Lord I will be still
Take time to wait on You
Let your presence fall
Your glory fill this place

Bridge
Make my heart shine, like the sunrise
Lord You’re more than enough, You’re more than enough
Sent You’re daylight, took my night time
Lord You’re more than enough, You’re more than enough

Hey Rob!

This is a nicely crafted song - sung and performed with feeling too - well done.

I don't know what others feel, but personally, I wouldn't change a thing (ooh, except changing "Sent You're daylight" to "Sent Your daylight!!)

Keep up the good work on the far side of the planet!

God bless

Rog

Hi Rob

Great song my friend....however...and I hate using that word, but I guess you're here to take onboard opinions... I felt that your Verse and Chorus should be the verse and the Bridge with a few subtle note changes could be your chorus.

I don't think over here in Wales, this would be the type of song we'd sing in Worship, but what I do get a sense of, is a sole Mime/Dance accompanying the song. Your lyrics and the mood of the song has great potential to impact the listeners. Could be a very moving moment and you could use it alongside a Message that preaches the same.

Robert