This is a song I wrote a year back. I would love your feedback on it.Thanks.
Navaz
IN EVERYTHING
B7 E
In all that I do
C#m
In all that I say
F#m A B7
I want to please you- in every way
E
In thought and deed
C#m
In the words that I speak
F#m A B7
Lord have your way - in me
E B7
In everything in everything
F#m A B7
Let my whole being be pleasing
E B7
In everything in everything
F#m B7 A E
Let my whole being be pleasing to you
B7 E
Lord you paid the price
C#m
For all my sins
F#m A B7
You did it all for me - on Calvary
E
Now take my life
C#m
And let it be
F#m A B7
A pleasing sacrifice- for my King
B7 E
Through sunshine and rain
C#m
In joy and in pain
F#m A B7
Let my whole being be pleasing
E
When I’m tempted to sin
C#m
And be led astray
F#m A B7
Lord not my will – Lord have your way
BRIDGE
C#m B7
Your grace will see me through X3
A B7
In all that you’ve called me to
(Repeat)
© Navaz D’ Cruz 2011
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Navaz D Cruz
(www.wordofgracechurch.org. www.wordofgracechurch.blogspot.com)






Hi
this song really does have a lot of potential
i just have a few suggestions to make the verses flow more.
how about
in all i do
i will honour you
i want to please you in every way
In everything the way i think
Let my whole being be pleasing
In everything in the life i live
Let my whole being be pleasing to you
when im tempted to sin
draw me to my knees
not my will- lord have your way
this is still a really good song.