Hey Ash! Like your other song I saw this one feels personal, again I like that in a song; I get tired of songs that feel too generic. I guess the generic can reach a broader audience tough, perhaps the preference of one style over the other is a matter of taste? Anyway, it’s a really nice song. I think the opening lines are the weakest at the moment. Mostly because there are two statements (one about “cloudy” and one about “mapped”) that kind of say the same thing. I’d recommend trying to focus the song by replacing one of the lines with something to move the thought forward. For this line, “Go in further that i've been before” (FYI, this is a personal and subjective thing from me, feel free to disagree) I think wordage that says we can get closer to God by degrees are kind of misleading. I’ve come to this realization that God is always so very close, it isn’t that we get closer, or reach the next level with God; I think we’re already there, we just have trouble coming to grips with it (so to speak). It’s splitting hairs, not a huge deal really. Good stuff though! I liked it, I think you captured the theme you set out for. Keep it up!