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23 July 2008 - 3:38pm
Hey Guys,
We debuted this song last Sunday and it went over great! It's a real timely song for what God is specifically doing in our congregation, as far as encouraging us to build and increase our faith in our everyday lives.
I'm looking for any lyrical changes that would iprove the song, with alternative suggestions being HUGELY appreciated! I'm also looking for any cooler chord progressions or changes that hit you when you listen to the song. If you think it's good, just let me know - don't dig for something "wrong"!
I'm tuned down a half-step, so the songs true key is F# (G tuned down a half-step).
Here are the lyrics:
There is no fear
In Your presence
(And) You are here
Your Word is Spirit
You intercede
Before the Father
And know our need
Before we speak
You are
The Lord of the miracle
The One who restores and heals
The God over every need
I believe
With hearts of faith
We will trust You
Walk on the waves
Our eyes are on You
We cling to grace
When all is falling
(And) We'll stand amazed
As You reveal...
You're my hope
'My strength
'My peace
And my confidence
(x4)
Thanks a million, guys!
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Jeff T.
23 July 2008 - 10:50pm
Hey Jeff...
I Think the song is really strong,(the melody is going round my head as we speak!)
only thing i would change is the "I believe" to "we believe" if this has come out of what God is doing in your congregation it would be great for the whole congregation to own it as it were and sing as one body.
I like the key its in, and personally i dont think it needs "cooler" chords. I feel the chords you are using work and dont distract from the amazing lyrics. plus practically there is not many songs in F# so some might find linking the song with others hard.
speaking of the lyrics (I especially love the second verse, really fresh and deep.) where did the thinking come from behind the line "Your Word is Spirit"?
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Hey,
Thanks for the feedback - I really appreciate your time! I had thought about doing the "we" thing but I think that it needs to be consistent throughout the whole song. In other words, I can't say "my" in the verse and "we" in the chorus. I love the whole congregational concept but I felt like if I had to pick one type of ownership for the whole song, it should be personal instead of plural. 'Hope I said that in a way that makes sense!
I should have thought of the key thing! We all tune down a half-step, so we're just playing the song in "G".
We've had some serios craziness going on close to our church with an "evangelist" named Todd Bentley. A lot of people have been getting caught up in a false idea of what it means to be "Filled with the Spirit". My pastor delivered an incredible message, based on a Biblical look at what it means to be "Filled with the Spirit". 2 verses which blew me away were:
"the words I speak unto you are spirit" (JESUS speaking!)
John 6:63
"the spirit, which is the word of God"
Eph. 6:17
I love the fact/thought that God's Spirit is present in His Word and that being filled with the Word is, Biblically speaking, the same thing as being filled with the Spirit. So if I am storing His Word in my heart and abiding in His Word, then His presence is "here"! That blows my mind...
Thanks agian for the kind words and encouragement!
Jeff T.
blogsology.wordpress.com
Jeff T.
come on now!! great stuff mate it's all about scripture ;)
p.s your not saying "my" in the verses?
blessings!
Man awesome song. I to think the song could be improved by changing the I believe to we believe and the bridge references to 'our'. Or you could change the verse 'we' to 'I'. But absolutely ripping song! Ive already listened to it 3 times, and the lyrics are fantastic!
Keep it up
Hey great voice and very cool song
I liked the change to the rhythm but just wondered if it might come in earlier say for the second verse?
Now all I need now is the chords!! ha ha
great stuff
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Chris & Iain - I totally didn't realize that I didn't have the consistent me/we thing going on! I definitely need to tweak it so tat it's consistent - I 'll try and change it so that it's got the "we" focus. Thanks for pointing that out! That's why feedback is so important...
Thanks Mackam - when we do the song as a full band arrangement, the verses and first 2 choruses have a very open 8th-based groove on the toms. I thought about grooving the verse sooner but specifically decided not to because I think it's the predictable thing to do. The feel of the song stays very open without ever really "breaking" into a driving beat until the instrumental verse after the second chorus. Waiting that long actually created a really cool "tension" so that when we "Break" into the big instrumental, it just explodes! But thanks for the point - 99 out of 100 times, I'd do exactly what you mentioned.
Here are the chords if anybody wants them. We play the song tuned down a half-step, in the key go "G". The numbers in brackets represent the number of beats each chord is played for:
INTRO:
G2 (8) – G/B (4) – Em7 (4) (x2)
VERSE 1:
G (8)
There is no fear
In Your presence
G/B (4)
And You are here
Em7 (4)
Your Word is Spirit
C2 (8)
You intercede
Before the Father
D (8)
And know our need
Before we speak
CHORUS:
G (4)
You are
Em7 (4) D (4)
The Lord of the miracle
C2 (4) G2 (4)
The One who restores and heals
Em7 (4) D (4)
The God over every need
C2 (8)
I believe
INTRO
VERSE 2:
With hearts of faith
We will trust You
Walk on the waves
Our eyes are on You
We cling to grace
When all is falling
(And) we'll stand amazed
As You reveal...
CHORUS (play the C-chord @ the end for 1-bar instead of 2-bars)
INSTRUMENTAL VERSE
BRIDGE: (play G/B (4) – D (8) the last time)
Em7 (4)
(You’re) my hope
C2 (4)
My strength
G2 (8)
My peace
And my confidence
(x4)
CHORUS (play the C-chord @ the end for 1-bar instead of 2-bars)
CHORUS (w/3 additional tags riding the C-chord; end on the 1-count of the last
“believe”)
Jeff T.
blogsology.wordpress.com
Jeff T.
After playing it through both ways and thinking about it a bit, I'm going to make the song personal, rather than corporate. I think when it comes to a subject like faith, the personal context is really powerful.
So the last 2 lines of VERSE 1 will be:
And know my need
Before I speak
VERSE 2 will be changed to:
With a heart of faith
I will trust You
'Walk on the waves
My eyes are on You
I cling to grace
When all is falling
(And) I'll stand amazed
As You reveal...
Thanks again for the help!
Jeff T.
blogsology.wordpress.com
Jeff T.
ok sweet. I just love this song!
great song. very smooth and just solid overall. Just to weigh in on the 'we' 'I' issue, I like the original version because the 'we' speaks of God's promises over us which are the same for everybody, and the 'I' is a personal statement, because I really don't know if other people believe, but I sure can declare my faith. Anyway, that just threw out more into an argument over such a 'wee' thing (hahahaha). Rock on!
-Ryan





