Hey,

I just wrote this a few weeks back, its only draught 1 we'll say. Im just trying to capture the complete glory, beauty and awesomeness of our Creator Father.

So far there are 2 verses, chorus, and bridge (the classic i guess) but I'm encouraged to think a 3rd verse is needed.

I would be encouraged to hear your thoughts

Verse 1:

Father I bring my soul to you
I give you my all
I put my life in the palm of your hand
And say that i am yours

Verse 2:

You bring strength to the weary
You bring power to the weak
In your name i will not fall
My God, Oh my God how marvellous you are,
I live to say i am yours

Chorus:

Jesus, My/Oh Jesus, your magnificent and true
I will depend on the glory/power of my Lord
The maker of all

Bridge

It was you, who brought me to be
It was you, who completed me
It was you, who died for me, to set me free, to be all I can be