It's March! Tim & Al become audio tour guides for the big London conference this month, listen to new song 'God Of All' by Ben Cantelon. Tim interviews Al exploring the key values of worship, followed by an arm wrestle!
17 January 2010 - 8:45pm
Hey,
so i wrote a new song and looking for advice to make it better. Oh and a good name for it. hehe
P.S. Sorry about the rubbish recording - i only have my laptop and mic.
Lord we are singing, singing to you.
Lord we are praising, praising the king.
Lord we are lifting, Lifting your name
On high above all names.
Come let us sing to the lord
Let us give a big shout to him, for he is king
Let's come before him now
with hearts full of thanks and praise to the end of our days.
For the Lord is good
For the Lord is great
For the lord is;
the king of all kings. (x2)
Let us sing to you, God almighty
Let us sing that we've been saved.
Let us shout to you, God Almighty
Let us shout 'We are saved' (x2)
We are saved!
Thanks :)
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Hi Andrew,
Sorry you didn't get any feedback.
How about calling it 'King of all Kings?' I think that's original and seems to give a fair reflection the song.
It's kinda hard to get a genuine sense of the song without the backing of a band, it sounds a bit 'wordy,' but I think that's just because you've got a really syncopated ryhthm on the accoustic which makes the melody sound more complex than it probably is. The dynamics of a band backing will give a different feel between the verse & chorus sections as well which will help.
It's not a bad song (as you ask), I think we both just hit a spell where everyone wanted feedback on their stuff without necessarily taking the time to comment on others'.
God bless ya,
Neil
Hey thanks, well that makes me smile that its not bad. i like that name. I think it works better than that Lord we are singing.
Thanks mate. I'll work on the band thing. :D
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It can't be that bad can it? Not even any help with the title?
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