Hi Timmann,
first of all, nice guitar playing! Second - I know it's probably not what you had in mind, but with a bit of tweaking this could be a good kids' song! Speaking as a kids' worker who is always wishing more songwriters would turn their talents in this direction, my antenna went up when I heard this! If you cut it down to make it simpler (ie verse 1, chorus, possibly a more kid-friendly version of the bridge and then leave it at that or make a shorter ending), it could work pretty well. The tune (and the way you play it) is funky but simple - perfect for junior age kids. It's also on a topic that kids'songs are short on - there's no end of songs on God's love but who says kids can't do mission?
Something to think about anyway
Becky