Katherineanne
From townsville city
Well i thought i would just put this up, its garage band stuff and i sound like owl city but i did it all in a couple of hours... i guess just brain storming, getting something "out on paper"
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Hidden here in your mighty hands
Your grace extended for all mere men
I look up as heaven shouts your praise
Father, holy is your name forever
King forever
My soul sings
Hi Katherine,
The tune and the backing music work well for a kind of contemplative, enjoying God's presence kind of a song. It makes me think of Dido! I also like that there's not too many words in it, which again suits this type of song. I think though, that you've tried to go for too many angles all in one go. It could be better if you were really ruthless with the lyrics and took it back to your favourite/best lines and then tried to say more about those aspects. For example, if you were going to go for a song about loving being with God, you could start with 'Hidden here in your mighty hands', change the next three lines to focus more on that, and then perhaps play around with the bridge on that theme (keeping the line 'my soul sings' would work well in that case)
Hope that's helpful
Becky
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Can you type your words up Katherine? Makes it easier to comment, there are a few bits I can't quite make out.
Becky
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