Hey Gary. I enjoyed listening to the song - great melody & effective arrangement. I can envision a congregation easily joining in. There are a few lines which seemed that they might benefit from a little fine-tuning: "There’s a reign that is holy There’s a King, a King of glory" - it seems like the verse would be better starting with the King of Glory line since that is what the verse is about, (verses 3 & 4 referring to He) Starting off singing about God's reign doesn't really fit. Here's some examples of alternate wording. Even though some of the line beats are different, they should still fit with the strumming/feel of the song. *There's a King of endless glory *Lord of all, pure and holy And He’s here with us now Yeah, He’s here with us now *There's a name above all others (Phillipians 2:9) *An endless treasure to discover (Eph. 3:8) And He’s here with us now Yeah, He’s here with us now "There’s a purer desire" - not sure what is intending to say & how it fits with the rest of the verse, other than making the rhyme work. "You are the peace in the war we bring" - the wording of this line is confusing "You are the source of the songs we sing" - if you rework the above line, you might redo this one - it seems like I've heard this used in other songs, maybe... As far as the title & lines usin the phrase "holy reign" - it's a cool phrase, but I'm not sure if it is tied directly to the main theme of the song, which seems to be that God is amazing and powerful, and He is present when we worship Him. Anyway, hope I haven't overstepped my bounds. Oh yeah, one more thing. Wish I had your singing voice - love it! John Green Recent Rainfall Worship - free mp3s and chord charts www.RecentRainfall.com