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8 May 2009 - 7:28pm
hi a song i did yesterday felt like sharing it.........i just wanted to worship in song........Just wanted to lift his name on high......tell me what u think
don't have no recording material so i did the best with what i have......made some mistakes while playing....but i was in a hurry so i couldn't go over it...thanks for listening.
vs1
holy is the lord our god
holy is the lord our god
cho
we lift you high
we magnify
we glorify
your name
vs2
Awesome is the lord our god
Awesome is the lord our god
cho
Bridge
Hallelujah hallelujah
To the lamb....
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8 May 2009 - 7:29pm
plz Slice and dice if needed....
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yo darren wats up........this sounds nice bro......i could worship to this all day...
keep it up.....improve ur playin even more........
Ariel
Ariel
Hey man, I don't see any attachment for the music file?!
Hey.........u should see it now.....lol
There it is!
I like it man - a very nice tune. Simple and singable. I like the guitar as well!
The only thing that could be worth a look at is perhaps making the bridge slightly more in the major keys as the whole thing is pretty much in the minor. It might add more dynamic and variety to it but thats just a though and no means a criticism!
Thanks for posting this up, good work!
Josh
hey josh.....thanks for ur advice............but the thing is...i understand what ur saying but i kno nothing about music theory....i know alot of chords don't know their names...i don't even know what key i'm playin in....lol...but i can see if i can get somone to help me
Hey Darren/Delioncub
Really chilled out song this one, nice one to reflect on, and lovely sound.
I quite like the minor sound Josh talks about.
Only a couple of things I'd mabye say -
In the chorus, I'm not sure about "We Magnify", is there something else you could say there? or what are you actually trying to say?
I'm also not too sure about the bridge, not sure if it adds anything as it is.
Its a nice song though, just to lift his name on high as you said.
Thanks for posting, and keep it up.
God Bless
Neil
yo Neil.......Thanks for the post.....this is what i was thinking........we magnify and glorify Gods name.......magnify meaning..To glorify or praise.......as for the bridge. hallelujah is the highest note of praise...i really couldn't see myself using any another words.....i wanted it to be a song that sets the mood for worship..and that we could pour out our hearts to God through song.......just in total adoration of him....
Thanks Neil
Darren





