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3 November 2009 - 5:33pm
Verse
He is my shelter,
He is my rock,
He is my father,
My innermost thoughts
He is might and
He is my strength
He is my Joy and
He is my friend
Chorus
He is High above all of the Angels
His voice reigns above all our cries
He is high above all of the mountains
He is high above all of the skys
Bridge
He was lifted high
upon that cross
he bled and died
for all of us
He was lifted high
all for loves sake
He bled and died
so that we might be saved
Any further improvements are welcome
if u would like me to make a recording of this song please comment and i will although i hate recording myself ... lol
i would also like to thank Keiran Joseph for his contributions
6 November 2009 - 5:49pm
Thought I'd start commenting on all the songs that seem to have been missed and are on the second page....
I like the lyrics in this song and feel like they come from your heart.
I think it's important to try to maintain a focus in your songs, i.e. you start talking about God being your comfort, shelter, rock, etc, then move on to him being High above all others, then move on to talking about the cross and how we are saved.
All these truths are good and relevant, however, it may be an idea to try to focus the song a little more.
I can't comment on the tune, as you haven't got a recording yet.
I particularly like the line "His voice reigns above all our cries"
Keep up the good work.
Alex
http://www.biggerthanthemusic.co.uk
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