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He is high... a.k.a song i wrote last night ... please read
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Verse He is my shelter, He is my rock, He is my father, My innermost thoughts He is might and He is my strength He is my Joy and He is my friend Chorus He is High above all of the Angels His voice reigns above all our cries He is high above all of the mountains He is high above all of the skys Bridge He was lifted high upon that cross he bled and died for all of us He was lifted high all for loves sake He bled and died so that we might be saved Any further improvements are welcome if u would like me to make a recording of this song please comment and i will although i hate recording myself ... lol i would also like to thank Keiran Joseph for his contributions
Thought I'd start commenting on all the songs that seem to have been missed and are on the second page.... I like the lyrics in this song and feel like they come from your heart. I think it's important to try to maintain a focus in your songs, i.e. you start talking about God being your comfort, shelter, rock, etc, then move on to him being High above all others, then move on to talking about the cross and how we are saved. All these truths are good and relevant, however, it may be an idea to try to focus the song a little more. I can't comment on the tune, as you haven't got a recording yet. I particularly like the line "His voice reigns above all our cries" Keep up the good work. Alex
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sounds good man, you should get it recorded and up here,. would love to hear it!
Kieran-Joseph Murray