Granpa Urynis a...
From unknown
14 November 2009 - 10:16pm
I dont think the 2nd verse is correct, needs to be changed but cant be bothered.
You give your love
you give it all
you give your son
you give a call
To the weak
To the disconnected
you give your grace
To the soul infected
there is peace when i come to you
i want you in everything that i do,
and i do
praise the father
praise the son
praise the spirit everyone
from my heart
from my lungs
a song of gratatude is sung
3 is 1
and 1 has won
has conqured death has over come
join the love and make a shout
thats what the trinity is all about
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gavinball
From Fishponds Baptist Church, Bristol, UK
17 November 2009 - 7:24pm
hi there,
wicked recording thanks for sharing!
very original style, the lyrics are slightly odd in places, but as a performance peace could be overlooked.
3 is 1 and 1 has won, clever idea nice work.
i would love the keys to stay in the recording on the chorus, but thats just me.
God bless,
gav.
I have decided that I hate this song. I like the chorus but thats it. I did try to write it for a 'congregation' but once again got side tracked and failed.
I may rewrite it with a better verse/prechorus one day, but now im going to watch some TV.
dont think you should hate the song, i think its got great potential, dont be too hard on your self youre really talented.
God bless,
gav.
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