I love the syncopated solo. The driving time is also something I have a weakness for liking! Good stuff. The production is super-cala-fragl-istic-expe-ala-docious; the melody is easy to follow and is not boring. I like how it is not too involved lyrically. The only thought I had was tied to the theme of the song, in verse 1 you talk about how “I see your glory…” and “I hear your praise” and “You’re there in everything…” But that seems to stand in contrast with statements like “Lord let your Glory fall” It is a slight observation on my part and may be off. But, to me it seems that to ask for Gods glory to fall and for his presense to be all we see after stating He is everywhere and obvious etc. only weakens the focus of your song’s statement. Personally, I love the mention of how God’s glory is evidenced everywhere. The idea of asking God’s glory to fall/be more evident is very common in worship music. But, I think that can create this sense of distance between the worshiper and God. If you wrote the chorus to follow your first verse I think it would make the song more fresh, focused, and powerful. Just my simple take, no doubt you’re a talented writer and musician though! Keep it up!

I really like this, and have to respectfully disagree with Gav on this point, in that, as songwriters, we often use poetic language and as such my immediate take on that line was that the word "song" was used to represent worship and as such the line to me means "I worship you unendingly" (if undendingly is indeed a word...) Did any one mention to Martin Smith that actually he couldn't sing unending songs about how God saved his soul? After all, he has to eat sometimes, and sleep... ;-)