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Gravatar for david_macrae david_macrae From unknown
26 April 2010 - 4:05am
I would love to hear and feedback and constructive on the whole song. songwriting, production etc. I did the whole thing myself. I played all the instruments and sang except drums which was sampled from a casio keyboard into a digital multitracker. I am interested in levels vocal etc. Thanks dave. and instruction on how to mixdown and master. also I have a few more song I have done for my demo on my myspace: http://www.myspace.com/forgivennotforsaken. should I upload them for review as well? btw I am a worship leader in a church called Victory Outreach Simi Valley. It is nice to meet you all. Ijust recently learned about the worship central podcast and have really enjoyed it.

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Gravatar for alexboxall alexboxall From New Community, Southampton
#1
26 April 2010 - 12:03pm
Hi David,

Just wondering whether you'd like some feedback on lyrics as well?

thanks,

Alex

http://www.biggerthanthemusic.co.uk
Gravatar for david_macrae david_macrae From unknown
#2
26 April 2010 - 5:05pm
Yes please. I am always interested in improving lyrics. Thanks, David
Gravatar for alexboxall alexboxall From New Community, Southampton
#3
27 April 2010 - 3:02pm

Cool. Please could you post the lyrics?

Makes it a bit easier to critique. Thanks.

Alex

http://www.biggerthanthemusic.co.uk

Gravatar for alexboxall alexboxall From New Community, Southampton
#4
27 April 2010 - 3:02pm

Cool. Please could you post the lyrics?

Makes it a bit easier to critique. Thanks.

Alex

http://www.biggerthanthemusic.co.uk

Gravatar for david_macrae david_macrae From unknown
#5
27 April 2010 - 7:34pm

(verse 1)
Word is out I'm totally sold out, I've got a new point of view.
I realize that I shouldn't be alive, but I am because of you.

(pre chorus)
Nobody else could strech their arms upon the cross and say
this I do I do for you... Father forgive.

(Chorus x2)
I've been forgiven, I've been forgiven,
forgiven, forgiven not forsaken.

(verse 2)
Hit the streets tell everyone I meet, he'll do the same for you too.
Give him a try you gotta die to stay alive, you aint got nothing left to loose.

(Pre Chorus)
(Chorus)
(Chorus - youv'e been forgiven...)
(chorus x2 - wev'e been forgiven...)

end

I see one thing I probably should change the aint to something like you dont have anything left to loose..

anyway thanks again.