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Faithful Father - You are Magnificent
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Hi, So this is my first posting on here, quite a simple recording of a song I wrote in July. Be great to here your comments. Tim V1 Faithful Father, In you I trust In you I hope, In you I find my strength Mighty Saviour, You’re my strong tower, my firm foundation, you’re the love that endures When I’m kneeling in the valley, When I’m reaching for the sky I can feel your love surround me, From deep within my spirit cries Chorus You are Magnificently Wonderful, Eternally so powerful you are, Yes you are And you use all things for your glory, All creation tells the story of who you are, How great you are For there is no one like you, No one as glorious as you My God How Magnificent you are, How Magnificent you are V2 My Provider You Hear my cry, You pour your blessings, You Restore my life again King Forever You’ve captured my heart, To you I surrender, To you I live my life When I stand before your glory When I bow before my king I still feel your love surround me From deep within my spirit sings. Tag You are faithful, Yesterday forever, And your love endures, Yes your love endures Tim Brown 2009

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Hello Tim, Good effort with this. The chorus is very catchy. I do find 'How Magnificent you are, How Magnificent you are' rather relentlessly high to sing - and yet I can't see that it can be transposed down easily given the low start. Maybe something to think about. I really like the lyric 'When I’m kneeling in the valley, When I’m reaching for the sky'. I think you could explore creating more lines like these as the rest of the lyrics are more commonplace IMHO. Hope that's not too picky as I think you've created a decent song. God bless, Ian
Hey Ian, Cheers for the feedback... Fully understand the transpose issue... Tried it in A at first but it made the verses a bit low and flat.. It needed the lift to Bb... It makes it a song that can't be sung quietly ... hmm Tim
Here is a link to a live recording of this... Shows the song a bit better me thinks... Be great to get some more thoughts. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OiFeYIcK6hQ Thanks