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18 November 2009 - 2:57pm
hi,
this is something a mate and I have been playing around with...the lead guitar needs bit of work, its a tad slow and the distorted vocals...
let me know what you think,
dubsy
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18 November 2009 - 4:41pm
Hi Dubsy,
This is cool - bit of a Kings of Leon feel!
Is this a song that you'd use in church or more of an outreach thing?
I like the theme just wonder whether it's a bit too edgy for church... just a thought.
Luke
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Hi Dubsy,
Sounds great, any chance you can post the lyrics?
Thanks
Thanks for the comments. The song has never been used apart from when i jam with friends
I should have put the lyrics on sooner, apologies:
I feel lost, I feel down
I'm having doubts I cannot shake
I've lost sight I've lost hope
In all the things I used to know
My soul longs for Your watering
My soul longs for Your rescuing
Lord keep my eyes on You
The blessings are no good
Without You
Lord fan this flame to life
I'm tired of trying to strive
Without You
verse 2 much like verse 1
bridge:
I've seen Your glory and its in Jesus
I've seen Your power working in us, through us
Changing from glory to glory
cheers,
Dubsy
Any more comments?
This is awesome! Great to hear one of your songs on here.
This would be great at a youth event. I could really see a large crowd really getting into the chorus particularly when it gets big.
Plus it sounds like Kings of Leon at the start. Can't be bad!
Alex
http://www.biggerthanthemusic.co.uk
Hey J, didn't realise it was you till I herd the voice!
Love the song, nice production as well. Really like to contrast of the piano in the chorus after the bridge and also quite like the distorted vocals at the beginning!
Great song!
Pip
alex -that's the second kings of leon comment, that wasn't the plan (not sure there was a plan) but i'll take it as a compliment!
Hi,
I'm new to WC, but feel like having a listen to music that isn't mainstream. This is a good song. It's catchy! Good job. Where do I listen to other songs in November?
Cool song - I really like the chorus, especially the guitar rif.
Trace
looooooveeee it johnny this mix is sooo much better than the myspace one keep it up i reckon meeting point sometime we should do it !!





