elikem christia...
From Frontline Church Liverpool
3 May 2010 - 3:17pm
I was wondering if I could get your opinion on this song. I tried out two ideas in the same song, I used the verse as a verse, but then tried it as a bridge instead. I'm not sure which works. I'm definitely going back to the drawing board but wanted some feedback as well.
Thanks.
Devoted to you,
I give you praise
For you are holy,
I'm filled by your grace
Indescribable,
You transform
Now I am redeemed, I am redeemed
I love you
For you loved me
You died on calvary
to set me free
Totally surrendered to your embrace
Now I am redeemed, I am redeemed.
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Hi Elikem
Man, sounds really strong, love the melody of both the verse and the chorus.
The only thing I personally would look to strengthen is the lyrics in some areas, I wonder if there is way of capturing the simplicity that you have brought with maybe something a little bit fresher?
Really good work though, keep at it sounds like it could work really well in church.