Wecome to the forum! This song has a really catchy tune and your recording is well done. I like the melody of the first two lines too. Your guitar riff (and playing) are really good. I have some opinions on the lyrics which you could take or leave: 1) Personally I find the tone of the chorus doesn't suit me. There IS no other path but the parable of the sheep and the goats suggests that people are judged according to the degree of revelation given to them. It IS vital for us to want people to know Him though as the lyrics say, and for people who find evangelism hard (like me) your song is a good encouragement. I wouldn't want to be singing about God's wrath against the unbelievers in a worship song though, although I suppose that the Psalms do it all the time...... Do you mean it to be a performance item? 2) I think you need to make sure the stresses are on the right syllable in the verses e.g. 'What a great victory WAS yours' and 'Grace and merCY' 3) I don't understand this bit: 'You defeated everyone who opposed All of your Grace and Mercy Your miracle workers and all you set free' I presume that the first line goes with the second? And who are the miracle workers here? As it's in the past tense I assume it is the disciples? Or is it Christians through the ages? 4) 'I'm leaded by the lamb' should be 'I'm led by the lamb. I know - I'm picky! Sorry but I hope it's helpful as IMO there is lots of potential musically and in terms of lyrical passion.