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21 July 2008 - 4:41pm
Right here's one I wrote ages ago (hence the dodgy recording!) There are some awful ad libs on here so please ignore them :)
Words:
Verse:
The city on the hill
The light that's shining still
to love that we may show
your grace upon the earth
Oh praise our God of light x2
Chorus:
We live our lives to shine your light
you gave the greatest sacrifice
a joyous shout shall rise within
to live for Christ the risen King
Verse2:
Let us be a light to them
and praise our God in Heaven
to love the weak and poor
that we know you more
Tag:
We're the city on the hill let us shine for you.
Just listening through now (for the first time in over a year) I think the verses could do with some work, and the chorus could have a lyric change (last line) We'll live for Christ the risen king maybe.
Remember feel free to say how you feel about it, I won't be precious about the song!
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21 July 2008 - 9:00pm
Awesome song, "We're the city on the hill let us shine for you." Realy good tag.
God Bless
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