Hi Nick, cheers for posting such an honest song of confession, it's good to see your heart searching after God as number one. To be honest, I'd say that this should stay as a personal song just for you, because it's probably assuming too much to imagine that every member of a typical congregation would be in exactly the same place of needing to confess exactly the same things as you've got in this song. (though to be fair, that was apparently exactly what Matt Redman thought when he wrote 'Heart of Worship' i.e. that it would never be used by anyone other than him, but obviously history has proved otherwise :) I think with this song though you're slightly in danger of still making it all about 'me', even though it's a song all about how you *don't* want it to be all about 'me'! I say that because for the first three lines of the chorus are 'I want... I want... I give...' where the focus is still on what I'm doing for God. It'd be a completely different song if you had a chorus like: You are the one who is writing the story You are the author of history You are the playwright, inviting me in To walk with you, to play my part, to be your hands, to know your heart or whatever - that's a pretty rubbish idea, but you see the difference? The focus is much more on God rather than what I'm doing for him. If you're keeping this as a personal song, don't bother changing it, but if you going more congregational that's the direction I'd suggest. God bless, Matt www.RESOUNDworship.org Free New Worship Songs