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hi james,

nice start on this song i think its going in the right direction. for me, a different title might be needed. 'as you spoke' doesnt really draw me into the song, whereas 'lord heal today' is more powerful.

the line 'by faith youve let believers be healed' kinda suggests that its God that needed the faith not us. i know that not what youre saying but its a bit vague at the moment.

also it might be better not to post quite so many songs in one go as you probably wont get so many replies if you posted one at a time and waited for a couple of weeks before posting again.

i think another verse continuing on the healing theme would make this song even better.

ps did u have a good time at s survivor?

God bless,
gav.

thanks for the comments; I think I'll hold back posting too many in future too

any ideas how to re-write 'by faith youve let believers be healed'

yeah soul survivor was great but really muddy; there were about 5 lakes around our tents before we left

hope you had a good ss too

yeh the weather was awful wasnt it, kinda ruined it a bit for me.

what about 'by faith many people have been healed' ?

cheers,
gav.

hey nice start! one suggestio is to change the line from with one touch you have to with one touch you raised the dead. Its a good start but it doesnt seem finished. I tihnk it needs another section, but im not sure.

Keep it up

Thanks for the suggestion; it definatly still in the early stages - I've had a few ideas, I will post them once they've been formulated a bit more