It's March! Tim & Al become audio tour guides for the big London conference this month, listen to new song 'God Of All' by Ben Cantelon. Tim interviews Al exploring the key values of worship, followed by an arm wrestle!
26 January 2010 - 12:49am
All of me.
verse 1
Teach me your ways Oh Lord
Each step down the right path (lead me down the right path)
and I will hear your voice and follow you (wait for you)
Be my light and my salvation
guide (lead) me down the right path
I will follow You forever, my hope is in you
Pre-chorus:
my hope is in you, my joy is in you, my life is for you
chorus:
I will praise You from this heart
For you've changed my life
True love is found in You
I give You all of me
Bridge:
You bring hope
You bring joy
You bring peace
My life is for You
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Nicole, very lovely song. Simple, singable, refreshing.
I like that most of the song does not have rhyming lines, that help it stay fresh. But I do think your chorus would greatly benefit from a few rhymes to make it more remember-able, as well as a few more syllables . Also you seem to be leading toward a song about finding peace and direction from God, while praising him through it. I hope you don't mind but I put a little suggestion down...they offer the rhyming and the syllables, as well as a reflection on God's sovereignty in all situations...
Here is a suggestions...
I will praise you from this grateful heart
For You hold my life in every part
True peace is found in You
Your hands will bring me through
In Him,
Dan
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