ben slee
From Christ Church Beckenham
14 July 2008 - 3:17pm
All I need
I wrote this song about a year ago, and by God's grace got it recorded for my album, 'Just as I am'! Anyway, adverts aside, its a prayer a cry to God of praise that He is all we'll ever need and that nothing is outside His glory, and so we come to Him and give Him our lives.
Enjoy and let me know what you think.
God bless,
Ben Slee
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bobbob
From unknown
14 July 2008 - 4:20pm
Good Song mate, i like the retro feel, very 70's.
I like the guitar riffs & piano piece to break it up, works well.
I think you need to maybe do a higher chorus, to lift the song, and to bring a distinctive gap between the verses & chorus. Maybe try it in a few different keys.
Hope this helps
God Bless
Tom Cross
TCHC Studios
tchcstudios.co.uk
tomcross@tchcstudios.co.uk
hey Ben
i think this is a really nice song.cant tell you proffesionaly what actually needs to be done, but it just need a bit of work on the actual quality . but the idea, melody and words are great. work on it a bit more and it will be great worship song.
Bless
Zaneta
Ben! amaing song, we should so use this song next worship session, realy amazing song :)
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Nice work Ben. Has a cool feel.
I'd work on the chorus. Doesn't feel quite as strong as the verse at the moment. Perhaps your opening lyric for the chorus should be 'Just as I am.'
There's real potential here mate.
Tim
Sorry - just realised the song is called 'All I need.' The album is 'Just as I am,' so ignore my comment about the chorus lyric.
Tim
Wow everyone!
Thanks so much for your really encouraging comments and suggestions! It's great to have some outside input.
Keep 'em rolling in!!
God bless
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