Jacob Kemp
From unknown
10 February 2009 - 4:06am
Hey so i am in the middle of writing this new song and i wanted to see if you guys think that it is not to sad, if you get what i meen, rite now all i have is he chorus:
Jesus, Savour to all there to catch me each time i fall,
you rain on high,above all things,
your my savour Jesus, my everything.
and maybe a bidge like this?
all i am is yours
all i am is yours x2
Michael
From Canterbury Baptist Church
10 February 2009 - 10:42am
Hey Jacob,
It doesn't sound too sad to me at all, I can think of a fair few well known songs that are sadder! The one thing I'd mention is that the bridge doesn't seem to fit in thematically brilliantly well with the chorus at the moment - though depending on what goes in the rest of the song it could well work :)
Keep going!
Michael
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